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Liquor Promenade.
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unscathed, a preposterous liquor promenade
no Louisiana hooker
could have tackled.
the barren lands were covered in bodies
holding bottles
holding onto whatever sober memories
they might keep hidden-- under a thick-skinned
lack of providence.
(cops hats and birthday bashings)
I could have felicitously drained you
when I saw you bite
that lip at me.
I could have drove deep into your mine shaft
of a heart
made base camp there
--when you kissed me, held my chin.
I cracked your face and evening skylined
your sight;
and you still fell in love with my
bitter tasting recklessness.
and I fall into
this dangerous exposed heart
of display case dresses,
and obtuse shattered
tawdriness.
no Louisiana hooker
could have tackled.
the barren lands were covered in bodies
holding bottles
holding onto whatever sober memories
they might keep hidden-- under a thick-skinned
lack of providence.
(cops hats and birthday bashings)
I could have felicitously drained you
when I saw you bite
that lip at me.
I could have drove deep into your mine shaft
of a heart
made base camp there
--when you kissed me, held my chin.
I cracked your face and evening skylined
your sight;
and you still fell in love with my
bitter tasting recklessness.
and I fall into
this dangerous exposed heart
of display case dresses,
and obtuse shattered
tawdriness.
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this is so amazing. I really love the breaks, and the parenthesis in the middle I absolutly love that line.